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Dinnerbone129


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a strategy, action or method used in a game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a style of interacting with games
    Status: Denied

ever since his home was destroyed he started to travel. he likes stealing food but he always replaces it.


Character Name: Puge
Character Race: OLOG
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: A big, strong, peaceful, olog that travels. he always wants food and is never satisfied.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your biography was far too short, it needs to be about one paragraph. Around 6-8 well written sentences. It also needs to have

Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are plagiarized. Doing this 2 more times results in a BAN of applying.

Your 3 interesting character facts need to include one weakness.

The description should describe your skin.

 

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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