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disorderly_0
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    Discord: .disoerderlycreator0
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I stick to my character, if I want to take an action I always ask myself would my character do this and is it withing their skill set, if the answer is no I pivot to an action the better serves the story and is fair.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It makes the story clunky, and it also gives some players an unfair advantage especially if conflict is involved
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Alyria
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brown hair and brown eyes, roughly 5'3 and 60kg. She wears a cream long sleeve blouse with green accents, she wears a brown belt and pants and boots.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))



"My story? Well my family used to fish, we weren't very wealthy but we survived, but during the Nyrheim Northern War things changed. There were attacks in our kingdom, my mother scared but my father wouldn't listen, he kept say that we weren't cowards and we must stand with our kingdom, no matter how scary. We didn't know that he had been colluding with the Skanarri, betraying his kingdom, us. One day I came home from a fishing trip and there he was, my father, a monster, he was standing over my mother bloodied and beaten body, I saw a small lump in the shadows, my little brother, he killed them. He spoke to me, not looking me, he said that they were cowards and that they were weak, that they were going to leave. He turned to me and said but you, you would never leave me because you are strong just like me. I lunged at him and we fought, I don't remember how it happened but he ended up tumbling off a cliff. There I was alone, lost, I couldn't go home, I couldn't see their bodies again, it hurt too much, so I travelled throughout the kingdom, selling goods, living in inns, whatever I needed to do to survive. I hope one day I can do something meaningful, something good."

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right, please define metagaming. Expand on why it makes the story clunky. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  • The war you mentioned occurred 150+ years ago in the LOTC timeline. I would suggest picking a different lore event to mention, or making it more generic. Overall the background itself is fine!

 


 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire) or by /msg Evonpire in-game for any questions or concerns.

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