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Roughcrow
  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It avoids being immersed in your character and the lore and is driven by a lust for control that avoids the roleplay this server is made for.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It avoids the game lore and it can expose privacy.
    Status: Denied

My character was found be the elves when he was abandoned by his parents when he was a child because they were trying to escape from a group of orcs that were hunting them down. My character was raised by the elves in Caurost, and he always questioned why he was different from everyone he knew. Then, he was later told that he was a human, and he eventually left home to search for his real family. He left with a platoon of elf soldiers, but they all fell to a band of orcs on patrol through the woods. My character killed the orcs and barely survived, his clothes ripped and his chainmail armor exposed. He went to the city of humans to look for his parents, and barley survived, but made it.
 


Character Name: Roughcrow
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: White, clothes that are somewhat torn, chainmail under the clothes, belt with a couple of pouches of gold, a dagger attached to my belt.
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

"You were expecting me? I've never seen you a day in my life." *The traveler sits, but his eyes dart around the room cautiously. "I don't mean to be rude, just I don't know who you are, and I've met shifty people in this town before." *The traveler looks left, then right, clearly anxious. "I'm sorry, I'm just expecting someone to run in and lop off my head or something. I'm just so paranoid."

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • The 'chased by orcs' is an overused stereotype: try to be a bit more creative and unique.
  • Your roleplay example is a bit unfleshed out: simply looking left and right is not entirely what we're looking for when it comes to actions.
  • Your definitions are a bit lacklustre too, try to think more about them!



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

Our LotC Discord: Discord

 

As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Failed to change backstory.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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