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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is the outside effecting the inside an example would be a villager starting a rumor about treasure in a cave that is surrounded by monsters in a forrest which then brings people to look for the treasure .
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is speed runners trying to get to the end and not learn the lore or anything to do with the begining or middle example would be a new kid pulling strings to get that high position and not work for it then ack like he is the best
    Status: Denied

Leon born with no memory of who his parents were. lived with strangers who would work him till dusk. when he was finally old enough to mine he took to ravines and caves to practice how to get ores and tell which ones where which. By the time he was 20 he was making enough to barely get by. he started looking into other jobs like wood cutting. and guarding caravans and/or merchants


Character Name: leon draggol
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: tries to be calm but has an impulsive attitude. always has to do something and cannot stand around. friendly till you mess with him. always pays back
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for taking your time to make this application but unfortunately, your application has been...

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it. 

 Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example.

✦ Your biography needs 
lacks the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory. 

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ Consider expanding your "Interesting Facts" to full sentences.

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin. 

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

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