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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: There is 3 simple rules I follow when in roleplay.

    rule one: respect for the other person. Power play just ruins the immersion for other people.

    rule two: common sense. This is the most basic of all. Use the thing in your head. Will my normal human character be able to blow up the sun? OBVIOUSLY NOT!

    rule three: The most important of all, knowing how to put limits and weaknesses on your character. I'm very experienced with this as I keep this in mind when making all my characters and I can identify when something like a weakness is needed to balance a character.

    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Well, say a person is out of character and a in chat there's people talking about an ambush and the person hearing it, uses that information in roleplay. It makes an unfair advantage because they can prepare.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Hanako Chizuru
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Long straight black hair. Coal hued eyes with dark eyebags under them. 5'7 and 49kg. Typically they wear blue or neutral outfits, primarily long cloth
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


 

As Hanako stepped into the swampy town their eyes darted around from building to building, then they were hit with an overwhelming earthy smell. They moved to reach for their handkerchief. A hand slid over their nose, the fabric in grasp. Seldom if at all would they decide to cross paths with a place like this. Their work made it easy to have an excuse and avoid places like this but unlike most times, this visit was needed to traverse greater lands than they had been. Their steps came to a stop once they entered the tent. Hanako's eyes sharpened as the woman said her greetings. The dark haired person's face remained neutral and partly covered by the cloth. "Indeed. I do hope my arrival was punctual."  Hanako paused for a moment before continuing  "I'm glad you had remembered our meeting set for today."   Their tone was almost aloof in a way. It was almost instinctive if not on purpose. They began to walk toward the cushion, but instead of sitting they stood. "I am nothing more than a humble servant to the kingdoms. Called for in accordance to when and where I'm needed most."  their words were solemn, though not in a sad way. It was purely dignified and formal. 

 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

-Your Physical Description and skin doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

-Your Physical Description and skin doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord


If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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