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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making your character know stuff that in the roleplay they do not have knowledge of yet or that you already know in real life and are using as character knowledge.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is forcing another player to do something that they do not want to do but is convenient to the powergamer.
    Status: Denied

Silveria was born far away in a small village. Her father was a Jester and her mother a Baker both for the Duke of where they lived. Silveria would earn money by doing tricks and singing songs for the people as she was abandoned at a young age when her mother was brutally murdered by her father who fled town soon after. Silveria gathered enough money to take back the bakery but was soon chased out of town by raiders. She used what she had left to sail Sutica and now travels around to sing in towns.


Character Name: Silveria Killua
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Silveria has fair skin, brown hair, and eyes so icy that they could freeze you. Her clothes are that of a commoner but she came from the middle class.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Because you are a guest, i must deny you because you are unable to edit the mistakes in the app.

Your powergaming definiton is a bit off. Check the WIKI link below.

Your biography needs to be a bit longer.

You cannot have learned magic when starting. Also you'll need an actual weakness inside your three character facts.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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