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Droplith


Droplith
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: over using power
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Trying to be more than someone and do unrealistic things
    Status: Denied

JJ was mistreated as a child (9) his parents were poor and worked for the rich, eventually they were killed by a attack from dragons attack on the village he was given to a family of orcs and eventually grew with their culture hunting with them sadly at the age of 16 he was taken by humans again and now wants to help the poor like robin hood.


Character Name: JJ
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Old and shaken by the world
Roleplay Scenario:

You've just woken up on a boat you get dressed then decide to leave you step out  to see a dead member on the crew you see that you have crashed a old druid approaches you eventually you faint.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


- Your metagaming definition is not quite right. If you need help, you can find more information here.

- Your powergaming definition needs some expanding. If you need more information, you can find it here.

- Your character biography needs a lore reference. You can find one on our wiki, on the pages for our current map, Almaris, or Major Nations and Charters.

- Dragons aren't a common occurrence on LotC. Please substitute the mention of them in your biography with something more common.

- Your character name should be their full name, as it's the name that will be shown above your head in game.

- Your character biography should be at least 6 sentences long.

- Your character's physical description needs some expanding and should be purely physical.

- Your character's personality traits need some expanding.

- Your character's fear should be at least 2 sentences.

- Your character's aspirations should be at least 2 sentences and link in with your character biography.

- Your roleplay scenario should be in third person, include both dialogue between quotes (") and actions, be at least 4 sentences long, and control only your own character.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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