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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By understanding that you don't need to win to enjoy the game. Whereas you can just enjoy the story and create a collaborative piece of work.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins the aspect of the story for players that are expieriencing it for themselves. Sharing it dissolutions things that might or might not have happened in the future.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Videnyr
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 17
Physical Description: deep red eyes, light skin, black, grey, and white clothes, brown boots, his old black crown, 5,9 feet tall, white, silky short hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

Videnyr sits himself down. He takes his sword from his belt and sets it down on the ground. The hag stares deeply into his eyes, he shows no fear. "My name is Videnyr. I have sailed across the sea to avenge my fathers death. He was slain in battle a while ago by foreign powers. I was only ten. After his death, his allies had left me and my mother. As we sat alone in our castle, my mother died to sickness. Lords close to us held the throne until I came of age to rule. I had searched for answers of my fathers death but had found nothing. Once realizing that everyone had abandoned me, I hopped a ship to Almaris to destroy those who killed my father. He was ripped from me when I had just begun to understand the world. Now I am goi-"

"You sound angry, how do you hope to kill those who wronged you without hurting the innocent?" The hag interjected.

"I hope to rule a nation. With strength I can defend and lead my people through wars and dangers. I want to be a strong king, ruling with not an iron fist, I will always be willing to help and adhere to the reasonable whims of my subjects. I know that my people will need a strong ruler, not one who only strives for himself. One who isn't afraid to do what is right." Videnyr stands up, grabbing his sword. "I hope to see you once again." He turns on his heel before tossing a coin to the woman. He pushes the flaps of the tent aside as he exits into the world he is prepared to join.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are royalty, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.  
  • Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years old.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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