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EarlyTrain371


EarlyTrain371
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: SMG EarlyTrain #7455
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its using outside knowledge to my advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: An overpowered character, kinda invincible
    Status: Denied

He was born to two loving parents, in a medium village and were fairly known by the people. He's dad was generous and usually helped the poor and the mom was the same, this was were he learned to follow God. He was an only child, which was weird because everyone else had brothers or sisters. From a young age he always loved to explore the village and outside the village there was forests, rivers and mountains and lots to explore. He didn't have many friends but only kept a few who helped him become better and who pretty much stayed with him for most of his life (until I depart for my adventure). This was also were he found out people could be fake and become backstabbers, which he hated. At a young age he heard stories of strong people who could move massive rocks and carry hundreds of pounds which inspired him to become much stronger and have bigger muscles which is where ambition and discipline came in, and he started to love working hard for it. Around 13 he was already stronger than most kids and he was hired as an apprentice by the local blacksmith. He's days were usually the same he liked his routine which was, wake up around 4-5am or before light to go and workout, come back and shower in the river, then read, he always liked having his mind sharp, eat and then start his day and work as a blacksmith and then finally go to church around evening to thank God and go home to he's parents. He always kept an eye for a companion but usually wasn't interested too much because as the days followed, he wanted more and wanted to be great. Then around 19, already working as a blacksmith for years, he saved up enough money to go out and explore the world that he heard was filled with "adventure, money, people... and so on". His parents were hesitant because they said they will miss him but he always wanted to be great, and that's what he strived for.


Character Name: Early
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brown afro hairstyle, brown eyes, big muscular build with a sideburn on his left chest, about 205lbs, tan, callous from in his hands, and about 5'10
Roleplay Scenario:

As I hear the words from the well-dressed gentleman, I look around me and I think to myself "Was that for me? Cause I know with this clothes I look poor compared to him." But as I stood there, he looked directly and me and I replied "I'm sorry sir, were you speaking to me?" He replied "Yes of course, what brings you to this lovely place?" I take a moment to reply and I couldn't answer him because I didn't know if I wanted money, adventure or what, I just knew I wanted to be great, so I said, "I wanna be great." He then replied, "What does great mean to you?" Which stuck with me and then as he said other kind and encouraging words he left and I went into the city thinking what he said.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Treshure! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Treshure#1736

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Treshure#1736]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message snoopie12 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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