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Enda Sylcaryn
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: ecolowow
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I am new to servers like this, but I don't believe it is fair or kind to break any rp. I want to enjoy myself and provide that experience to others!
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: This ruins the immersion and defeats the point of participating in rp experiences.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Enda Sylcaryn
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Tall and lean, hair long and golden. Dark brown eyes. She wears what she can craft herself from nature, including green cottons and leathers.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: Though nervousness of this new environment causes me to tense, I straighten my back and maintain a cool unbothered look. I do my best to come off as bored, as if my mind is not racing about what is possibly a few paces behind me.
 


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your definitions need work! Look at our rules wiki page on Powergame and Metagame to help pinpoint them better.
  • Your backstory is slightly short and talks in second person- try changing it to third person please!



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

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As well as this if you still need help:

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And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Failed to expand backstory and use third person in sentences.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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