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En_Boue
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: En_Boue#1189
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When someone uses knowledge that their character doesn't know yet/ever.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When someone does something op like *Kills (Player)* instead of *Tries to kill (Player)* also basic things they normally cant do like orcs smiting people or humans having the strength of an orc
    Status: Denied

I was born in the sanctum and I never went outside it until I was 13. My parents Farril and Madrion are still living there while I now go Inn by Inn trying to visit all of the lands so I can find the perfect place for my new home. Back when I was 14 I got attacked by orcs after they killed a trader in front of my eyes they gave me a huge scar on my back and I will never forget it, that is why I want a massive home inside a mountain so no-one can get to me. I am a only child, my parents reached the age where they went sterile right after I was born so they couldn't make me a sibling. I did have some friends who were like family to me, Bangon and Menthel. Together we made a treehouse and thought we were going to be adventurers but sadly Menthel moved away when her dad committed suicide, I haven't seen her since and Bangon went on his own path when he turned 18 but I am still in contact with him from time to time. In all of that time I learnt that I need to make friends and keep them because they make your life so much better. Sadly its hard for me because I am extremely shy because the war of the elven alliance. I am skilled in archery and hand to hand combat from it though. I do wish to have a family with a beautiful wife and two kids a one boy and one girl and be able to give them whatever they want in life. Those are all the main factors of my life and I cant wait to see what happens next.


Character Name: Tolthon
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: He has white long hair with crimson eyes he is 6'5 and 230 lbs they wear grey and red clothes with gold bracelets and gold on the top of their boots.
Roleplay Scenario:

He would walk up and pat his shoulder and say "I'm Looking for Love and Land" and walk away with his hand in his pockets.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


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