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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: External forms of communication
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Overpowering a player
    Status: Denied

Marcus Dejeru was born on a small island called Stalon, where he lived in the village of belnamulita. The village had been an important trade route between two minor kingdoms and had acted as a buffer zone between them. One year, a major disagreement concerning trade rights of merchant ships had caused the two kingdoms to go to war. Since Marcus’ village was between the two kingdom, they kept destroying the village year after year until the war ended. Marcus grew up in backwater, which was a shell of what it once was. It was ruled by bandits and insane warlords. His family was killed by bandits burning down his house, they decided to let him live and was kidnapped and brought to a foreign land as a slave, where he was forced into some king’s army. During his service, he endured many struggles during long winters and fought in many great battles.  But after many years, he grew tired of everything and deserted. After deserting the army, he went to his original village, but to his dismay, they told the bounty hunters that were looking for him where he was for a reward. They transported him into a ship headed back to where the army was encampmented for the winter. He eventually jumped off the ship to try to kill himself, but the tides brought him back to the atlas shores. He was passed out on the beach, when he eventually woke up two days later. After that, he began to wander around the land, seeking something new and interesting. 


Character Name: Marcus Dejeru
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Brown eyes. Dark brown hair. Wearing tunic with pants.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however they are very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarise)

 

 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

 

Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. These facts/traits should be at least five-word sentences and should focus on the personality of your character.

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The server wiki page has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players.

 

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (sophia#6666) or by /msg hellebore in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

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