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  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: EXOTIC_LORD#4342
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having an ingame character act on information that the player has access to but that the character shouldn't. For example knowing something you shouldnt know so you use it for an advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing things that are unfair and are more powerful, or hacking for your advantage. For example someone flying.
    Status: Denied

Tito Cooper was born on March 2, 1200. He is from a small town where everyone knows each other called Palmdale. Him and his brother loved play fighting and his brother Timo dream was to conquer the world and Tito was determined to help him. His Mother Elia was a lonely Mother because his father left them. Tito wasnt the smartest person in the world but he would never give up. He would get picked on in school but his brother would defend him. When Tito was 12 his mother died due to a disease he got working in a factory 24/7 because they needed the money. So it was just Tito and Timo. Timo being the older brother at 15 wanted to protect his brother and supply food. So he dropped out of school and went to get a job mining. The first couple month Timo would one of the smaller miners so he could fit anywhere in the caves so he would get a lot of diamonds and get more money for him and his brother. There was a new cave and it was the biggest cave yet and there was gravel on the floor and Timo fell on the gravel and fell into the cave and died at age 18. Tito was 15 when his brother died and he lived all alone. He dropped out of school and joined the army prep for kids under 18 because he was ready to die and had nothing to live for. he would release his anger in spar fights and he would win. The General was happy to see a prospect in the army. One day at age 16 Tito broke his arm and the army prep kicked him out but the General saw his potential so the General let him live in the house. The General would let him stay until he recovered for he can join the army again. It took him half a year to heal but during that time his friendship with the general grew and saw him as the father he never had. He lived there until 18 fighting, training to be the best warrior until he saw something. There was propaganda of some people going to conquer the world and he remembered his brother wanting to conquer the world. So being 18 he needed to find a job or join the military but his friendship with the general he want to leave the general alone so he delayed the date to join the army. He went into the town and was looking for jobs. As he walks into the last shop it was a elf owner. He was like a wizard elf. He had potions, fruits, foods, weapons from different places Tito has never seen before. So he was curious if he can work there. As he walks in the elf was reading a book that was from a land they both didn't know where it was but in the book it said you can revive some from the dead. Tito was curious so he was asking a lot of questions to the elf wizard. The elf wizard didnt know anything but only the top people can have the potion that can do it. So he thought he needs to conquer the world to revive his brother. He went to go get the flyer of the propaganda about the people going to conquer the world. It said they are leaving on March 2, 1219. That was tomorrow and that date was when we was gonna turn 19. He goes running back to his room to pack. before he leaves he leaves a note to the general telling him everything. The walk to the port was 12 hours so he needed to leave now. He runs off to the port. Its March 2, 1219 and he made it to the port. He sees the ship and its only one guy. He thought it was the wrong ship so he ask him. But the guy tells its the right ship. Tito was confused thinking it was gonna be a bigger group but didnt really care at the end. As the ship leaves he talks to the guy. The Guy name is Skul and he is 23. He a serious but welcoming guy. Turns out Skul mother knew Tito's mother. They knew each cuz of the factory. So it made the friendship better. They go on for a year and Tito is now 20. Tito and Skul are best friends and the find new lands they have never been to before. But one day Skul fell for the bait and fell into a hole with lava at the end of it and died. Tito is left alone but determined to conquer the world. 


Character Name: Tito Cooper
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Short (5,4), skinny (120 pounds), black eyes, black hair, Scars all over the body.
Roleplay Scenario:

I would say: Hello I'm on a adventure only I shall know. by any chance do you know where the blacksmith is at?

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Character Biography states your character was born in the year 1200, March. This is not possible as the current date on the server is 88 and the months on the server are not the same as IRL, please be sure to make proper adjustments!  

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

Within 24 hours or more there was no response to the pending post in private messages in revisions.

 

 

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