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FerrisFire
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: One of my most important intuitions as a roleplayer is that I'm not in control of the actions of others. I always leave things open-ended and try to make it so that people can respond to what I'm doing, rather than dictating it through my writing. I never write in a manner that exceeds the capabilities of the world, character or do anything that is ridiculous to the moment or logic within the scene.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming influences the organic nature in which improvisational writing exists within. It contrives outcomes that are supposed to be organic and ruins scenarios by 'fixing' the outcome for those who are not involved within it. Due to the nature that no one can know everything going on between people who metagame, it creates a toxic environment that limits creativity and fairness. Even if you are to learn stuff like that, you should never let it influence your character's actions (because they are independent of that information).
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Nalnae an Eldreth
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 6'0", 155 lbs, Silver hair, violet eyes. She usually wears her riders gear with knightly regalia.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


There was a slight hesitation before she responded, with her pointed features sharpened like knives. Guarded with steeled defiance. "Well, if I must." The lady would unbuckle the straps of her breastplate. "Amongst the mali'aheral there was nary a better master of the Royal Stables then my father. He has taught me as his star rose to prominence in the garrisons and craftsmen of the capitol. Brought to many royal banquets and consorting with nobility at a young age, though a commoner our skills were valued. Our tenacity respected. Until..."

Pain twitched at the edge of her vision which caused those honed features to waver.

"One night, I heard a conversation at the dead of night. Young and curious I thought to listen. I knew not who had spoke, or of what. But I was caught and they fled. The next morning my father was bombarded with accusations that I was the result of a child with a human. A vile rumor that tarnished his legacy. His business disrespected. Trust broken. The spiral that it sent him in has always been a shade in the back of mind ever since. We lost everything... But with so much time to reclaim it yet."

Passion flaired in those pupils. "I seek now only to uphold the honor and dignity of my forebearers. To become a knight worthy of the Law, and to repair the disgrace heaped upon by name unjust. With my lance I seek to forge a new era of prosperity for elvenkind. Dutifully. With loyalty and respect for my betters."

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are a knight, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.  

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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