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Amirah
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: FinalPhoenix62#8068
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You knowing and acting upon something your character does not know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Giving your character the ability to make things easier than they should be by knowing something they aren't supposed to know of
    Status: Denied

               Amirah was born in the dark forest of Nan Elmoth, where vary few Elves lived, and even less ever left. Her parents used to live in the Kingdom if Renelia, while her mother was still carrying her brother they left the kingdom and settled in the forest. Amirah has tried to find out why they ever lest the city but they would never give her an answer. Amirah’s mother and father we’re very strict prideful people, teaching Amirah to be a proud elven girl and praise her ancestors, such is the religion of their people. Although her parents taught her well Amirah was also influenced by her overprotective and ambitious brother, Amion, filling her mind of adventure and excitement. Excitement that she just couldn’t get in her secluded home. “Who wouldn’t want a good adventure,” he would often say. Not many people there were her age so she often spent her time reading and daydreaming about the adventures her brother always talked about. Once in her early years (she was around 35-45) her brother said he’d take her on the journey he had always promised, not dangerous, but just enough so she could see what the outside world is like. Unfortunately things didn’t go as planned, having not been prepared for how gruesome the outside world was a group of bandits found them and wanted to sell them for slavery. (I looked it up and some believe Gondor practiced slavery so...)  The bandits almost succeded when Amirah and Amion’s father showed up and scared the bandits off. In his anger their father banished Amion from their home, heartbroken, Amirah never forgave her parents and swore to one day leave and find her brother. And when she was 79, she was finally ready to embark on her journey and that is where she finds herself upon a city.


Character Name: Amirah
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 279
Physical Description: Eye's - Icey blue
Hair - long and silver
Body-Build - Slim
Height - 5'10"
Weight - 130
Roleplay Scenario:

   Amirah looked down on the man with caution, having been raised in suclusoun for most of her life she was not used to regular humans. 

      “Adventure,” she said now grinning at the man “Who wouldn’t want a good adventure.” she said, talking more to herself than the man. He gave her a toothy grin before walking away. Amirah looked around the city again taking in the scenery and made her way forward.

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Please expand and go more in depth on your definition of Power Gaming
  • Persona Biography must include 2 lore references!
  • Dark Elves do not have red hair! Dark elves are also of heights 5'10" - 6'4" ft.  You can see what they have → here!
  • Skin needs to be charnged to suit what a ‘Dark elf’ looks like! 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Dinochan#1825 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LOTC Discord as well. 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to failure to fix the issues provided by Dinochann, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Skin needs to be charnged to suit what a ‘Dark elf’ looks like!  (They cannot have blue skin)
  • Please expand and go more in depth on your definition of Power Gaming


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @TreeSmoothie#2018, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: 

 

 
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