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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By immersing myself in my character, I feel as if I am that character. I personally love to think oput what I do before I do it, this helps me with accidental powergaming, as well as straight up powergaming.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is so dumb, you shouldnt be acting on or like you know something, if your character doesn't know it then play it like it is. It makes it so others cant do what their character may have planned to do and it sucks the fun out of everything.
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Character Name: Lokly
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Average height and weight, with black hair, bright blue eyes like the sky. Can be seen wearing clothes that may resemble a lumberjack.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"uhhhmmm, youve been expecting me?" I say as I eye the dingy old tent, my eyes dart from candle to candle, a visible confusion on my face. My eyes dart back to the old woman, I sit as she requests, "M-*coughs* My story?" I say holding myself back from vomiting due to the horrid stench. "Well, I grew up in a small town, where * cough cough* everyone knew everyone. Nothing happened without everybody else knowing about it. We were all like family, I specifically remember one time when we all gathered as a town to break bread." I look down at my feet and my face fills with dread and sorrow. " Sadly. . . Sadly this all was short lived, b-because one day, we were raided, by a group of bandits. A group of goblins and orcs alike, nonetheless. . . they were ruthless. Nearly slaughtering every single one of us, for nothing but entertainment and gold( whatever currency is used )." I visibly tear up slightly, holding it in as to not embarrass myself in front of the kind old hag. " I despise them, all the goblins and orcs. They are all the same, nothing will change that. They are all deranged sociopaths, and they only care about themselves" I say as I obviously  rile myself up. " Anyways, 2 others and I survived. They left me to do their own thing, about 2 years ago. I believe they were going to try and build a tavern, where all were welcome. Anyways I'm getting sidetracked, we traveled miles and miles. Exploring, Hunting, Surviving, we did everything you could imagine. It was some of the most fun in my lifetime. I learned how to survive by myself, I grew up, I got stronger. I came here to live somewhat of a peaceful life again." I say with passion and a smile on my face. " I want to settle down, and protect those I care about with this newfound strength!" I almost yell out whole-heartedly."Well, I guess you could say that's my story, I want to protect those who cant protect themselves, I'll live on for my village. . . For my parents. . . For my little sister. . ." I say slowly getting quieter towards the end, but never less determined.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Please make the above changes and repost your new application



 

My discord is @echo_42069 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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