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GamegirlAmy

By GamegirlAmy

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: GamegirlAmy#5471
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you speak out of character example: Rose and Amber are not with Lily but Lily responds to them talking, or example Rasha doesnt know Ira s name and Ira didnt tell her but she says Hi Ira in chat. Also when you know something your character doesnt but you just pretend he/she does it will be unfair and not fun.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Using Godlike powers example: Kiara shoots Zoe with her bow and arrow. That is powergaming because she cant just shoot zoe she sould attempt to because Zoe can move or dodge. Also its like Zack jumps over a roof. Jumping over a roofs not possible and he should say he attempted or tried.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

As Adira gets of the boat she quickly shapeshifts to human and starts exploring her way through the city,suddenly she gets approached by a well dressed gentlemen who looks at her with a big smile ," Welcome! welcome,"he bagan ."What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure?Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?" *Adira looks around him* "Why is he dressed like that and isnt he to friendly?Hmmmm....., She the decides to just smile and keep walking.

Character Name: Adira
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brown hair,brown eyes.slim body,49kl , 91,44cm, wears red and silver armor with blond patch at the back(Please zoom in when looking at my skin, tysm)
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, and here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are correct, though it should be noted that this is a medieval-fantasy roleplay server, and guns do not exist as you stated in your powergaming definition.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character is a hybrid halfling/dog. This is not a thing. Your halfling cannot be fur-covered. Please review the server lore on the wiki!
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was bullied in high school. Considering the setting of this roleplay in a medieval-fantasy world, high school doesn't exist. Most schooling is done at home, and the only institutes outside of that for learning tend to be higher education such as universities.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character has the ability to shapeshift, be very fast, see better, or just generally have powers that would not be possible for an ordinary person to obtain. Your character cannot possess or have deep knowledge of any magic when they join the server.
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has a tail and animal ears. This is not a thing. Please review the wiki page on halflings to get more information on them!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a noticeable fault in their personality, a simple distaste for violence not cutting it. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that your character is Christian. Given the fantasy setting of this server, Christianity does not exist. The closest religion in game would be Canonism, which you can read up on at this wiki page.
  • Your Character Like states that your character likes having the guts to fight, though you also mention her complete dislike for fighting earlier in the application. The same goes for you saying that your character enjoys hunting in this section, though you state in your personality traits and quirks that your character dislikes animal slaughter. Please clarify this.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response explains the thoughts in your character's head. Please only include what others observing your character could see-- actions and speech.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one sentence of dialogue in quotes from your character.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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