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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is a strategy
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: interating with games like RolePlay
    Status: Denied

The Elf Named X is a Magic Elf who wanders the World In search of a Hero to Help him save it form Destruction and in order to so he must train his new Hero so he goes out into middle earth and finds a strange stone a stone He has never seen before . . .


Character Name: X
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 999
Physical Description: X is a 999 year old Elf who wanders the world in search of a hero to help him save it from Destruction
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

  1. the first thing is your biography it is way too short and there is none of the servers lore. I would also request you give him an actual name than X. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Your metagame and powergame definition is not quite there. I would request you take a look at it and edit it. Here is the wiki for some help https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  3. your interesting facts are not that interesting, you cant just be magic. I would request you please take time and make them better. In sentence form.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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