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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using my own knowledge to create an in game character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: gaming to reach an end goal. such as top player,voter,richest, most hours, etc..
    Status: Denied

Owayou is a 120 year old snow elf. She comes from a high elf family but when they didnt accept her body type, being tall and thin, they banished her at a young age. This has made her grow into a smart & powerful individual who is very involved in snow elf culture. She may appear to be a high elf at times but when mistaken, she takes offence. These misconceptions have made her try her best to fit into the beauty norm of a regular snow elf, and fits in very well.  Gets along well with highlanders and has many friends. She likes adventure and being alone, but it never stops her from making as many friends as she can. 


Character Name: Owayou
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 120
Physical Description: tall, silver eyes, white hair, beautiful, innocent, powerful, and dangerous. young & wise
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing the application, I am sad to say it has been denied. While you've got the overall idea down for what you want, it appears you're a bit all over the place with a few different aspects of it. Below I will list the necessary changes or additions that must be made to the application to ensure you are accepted to the server on your next attempt. Also, I highly recommend you register an account with our website. Instead of being instantly denied if there are mistakes within your next application, members of the Application Team will be able to put you onto pending, giving you a period of 24 hours to make the necessary changes to your application. Anyhow, these are the necessary edits that must be made:

  • Your definitions are both incorrect. Take another look at the rules and you'll likely be able to reword them to show you understand them!
  • Your backstory must include at least 1-3 references to currently accepted and canon lore on Lord of the Craft. Please edit something in to reveal you have an understanding of our server's lore and history.
  • Your race is a bit confusing, as you refer to your character being both a high elf and a snow elf. If she is a high elf that has opted to adopt snow elf culture, that is fine, but it's important to make that distinction more clear. Also, high elves would not deny your character a place within their culture for being tall and thin. All high elves are usually tall and thin.
  • In your interesting facts section, you must have at least one fault, to add depth to your character.

You must wait three hours before applying once more. And I cannot stress enough how important an account on our website can be! Below you will also find some helpful links that may make the application process a bit easier. I would suggest joining the LotC New Player Discord, as it's full of hardworking individuals who are always willing to help new players get accepted.

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

 

LotC Wiki - High Elves: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

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