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Courtney

By Courtney

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Stuff to do with rules or strategy
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Interacting with games
    Status: Denied

Fun, exciting, brave, and wild

Character Name: Courtney
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Mysterious, nice and friendly but lives on the edge
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ada

 

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now. Consider contacting on me on discord if you need further explanation.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like the color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ Unfortunate "hockey" still hasn't been invented yet as it is only 1668 on Lord of The Craft. Consider removing it entirely from your
interseting facts. 

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts to full sentences.

 

✦ You don't seem to have a real Minecraft skin uploaded to your application, if you don't have a proper skin for your character you could always check our skin archive for temporary skins before you're able to acquire a more personal character skin.

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Ada

Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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