HLP7

You're on the right track! Just a few tweaks to bring your app to the next level!

✿ Your Metagaming and Powergaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿Your Character may not know magic; Magic is something that is learned in-game. (You cannot create an otherworldly or magical character.)

✿It appears on your character biography, You are a high elf but on you’re character sheet you are a dark elf, Did you perhaps put in the wrong race? Dark elf has its own culture very, very different from High elf'.

✿ Your character biography and interesting facts state that your father is an estimated Scientist and mage, Though this may be true in your character's eyes. But in LOTC it's near impossible to produce a character that they should know as famous but isn't. Especially in Hael’nor where every ranking is earned. So your father mak keep those traits, but he may not be famous.

✿Your interesting facts are a bit off; You still need a Positive fact about your character. To balance out and create a unique character to roleplay with! 

✿Your Character Biography should represent proper grammar; please be mindful when rewriting your biography.

✿ Your characters skin isn't up to Lotc standard or is it representative of your character biography or race you have selected. I recomended lookign through our skin archive, here . You can also contact me, and I can put you in touch with a skinner from the tailors guild to help out.

You only have 24 Hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes, you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord. Discord:Tigergiri#0774  Im always happy to help!

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes

@HLP7 I saw you put another application up, you don’t have to make a new application. You can just edit this one! 

Application has been denied for the following reasons:

On ‎7‎/‎1‎/‎2019 at 11:45 AM, Tigergiri said:

✿ Your Metagaming and Powergaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿Your Character may not know magic; Magic is something that is learned in-game. (You cannot create an otherworldly or magical character.)

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He killed his assistant shorty after with an outlawed torture spell.  His body was never found, and he was Never caught.

After this, he began to dive into magic. He had learned even more spell that his father. He cast a spell on him self that voided himself of all emotion — only logic.

That is where he is today. Is not allowed.

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✿It appears on your character biography, You are a high elf but on you’re character sheet you are a dark elf, Did you perhaps put in the wrong race? Dark elf has its own culture very, very different from High elf'.

✿ Your character biography and interesting facts state that your father is an estimated Scientist and mage, Though this may be true in your character's eyes. But in LOTC it's near impossible to produce a character that they should know as famous but isn't. Especially in Hael’nor where every ranking is earned. So your father mak keep those traits, but he may not be famous.

✿Your interesting facts are a bit off; You still need a Positive fact about your character. To balance out and create a unique character to roleplay with! 

✿Your Character Biography should represent proper grammar; please be mindful when rewriting your biography.

 

✿ Your characters skin isn't up to Lotc standard or is it representative of your character biography or race you have selected. I recomended lookign through our skin archive, here . You can also contact me, and I can put you in touch with a skinner from the tailors guild to help out.

You may reapply in 24 hours however please make the above changes before you do so

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Tigergiri#0744), my forum account, or on the server (Tigergiri).