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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: leloblelo
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i would stop the rp and question them
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it destroys the plot and makes plot holes in the rp
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Leo Crot
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5`9, neck length hair, 190 punds, dark red eyes, wearing leather pants and a chainmail with a green hood overtop
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: "I'm from a small village in Norland," Leo began, eyes fixed on the floor. "It was peaceful… quiet. Until the night they came" Leo pauses, the memory clawing its way up his throat. "We were attacked. No warning, no mercy. My parents hid me beneath the floorboards, hoping I'd be spared. They bought my life with their own." Leos hands curled into fists. "Since that night, I've had only one purpose—to find the ones responsible, and make them pay."

 
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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your backstory is quite good, but your definitions I find are a bit lacking. Please take some time to go over them: who would you contact if you saw powergmaing or metagaming ocurring, how would you prevent yourself from doing either of those things?

 

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

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As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • List reason; this message is usually for Ai related things or anything that makes an application an instant deny - see checklist



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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