Holy_Deku

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are somewhat reversed, but still not quite correct. Please fix these (maybe use examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. These facts/traits should be at least five-word sentences. Also, attempting to carry or pick up an object that is too heavy for you would not result in a broken arm, rather you would simply be unable to pick it up. And why does your character either freeze up or choose to dance whenever music is played during a battle? Perhaps just choose one or the other, and explain it in more detail.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character. Please edit this.

Ø Your skin does not fit LoTC’s medieval fantasy theme. Please find another, more appropriate skin. The LoTC Skin Archive on the forum is there for use and for inspiration.

Ø Please include actual cities that have existed on LoTC rather than referring to them as ‘the big city’ or ‘a big town.’

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. Keep in mind that mentioning the race of your character does not count as a lore reference.

Ø One of your character traits says ‘he can wield a blade better than the head knight his self.’ If you are trying to say that he is a better swordsman than a high-ranking knight, please change your character’s backstory to match such a high level of skill and talent, or lower his proficiency in swordsmanship. If that is not what you are trying to say please make the sentence clearer.

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The server wiki page has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Nectorist#7594) or by /msg Nectorist in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

cool researcher mother I’m going with a researcher theme myself ?

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character. Please edit this.

Ø The city you’ve mentioned, Linandria, is from a previous map, now vacated. Due to your character’s age, it is not possible for them to have been born there. Please look for a city from our current map/continent, ‘Atlas.’

Ø Nobody becomes an expert swordsman, better than a knight, through killing animals. Please either lower the skill your character has with a sword, or make their background fit having such skill.

Ø Why does music cause your character to freeze in battle? This isn’t a natural reaction anyone would have, so please change this weakness.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

Please make the above changes in your next application.