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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Going out of character to receive unfair advantages and breaking the "fourth wall" of the roleplay world.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing a certain outcome that may not be possible and is unfair.
    Status: Denied

My eyes glisten with excitement as I overlook things that I have never seen before, such as the traders selling their goods and children playing together amongst the rush of the crowd. I smile back at the man and reply that the excitement of adventure has brought me here, and that I've never been to the city or markets. I ask if he might show me the wonders of the area and the adventure that awaits.

Character Name: Neia Faephyra
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Neia Faephyra has long red hair, bright blue eyes, and a dark green cloak over black clothes. She is petite, 5'8", and weighs 120 lbs.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - Your Character Biography is missing some lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! You can find some pages for Almaris, our current map, Nations and Charters, and our general WIKI.

- Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Wood elves can't have red hair. You can reference the lore here.

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in third person and contain at least one dialogue of speech. 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Wood elves can't have red hair, they are typically darker skinned toned too.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/LotC

 I also would recommend that you have a look around the WIKI! 

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Polysemic

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- You did not make the above changes in the 24 hour timeframe.
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/LotC

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the WIKI!

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