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Icarus554


Icarus554
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge that your current character wouldn't know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is forcing things to happen to someone's character instead of your own
    Status: Denied

Grew up in a village near the beach with a family of farmers. His family was very religious. He was not satisfied with being a farmer and wanted to go beyond the small village, but never got around it since he was always overwhelmed by farm work. One day, pirates raided the village and destroyed almost everything. During the commotion, he got separated from his family and is now alone in the world doing small jobs or any job to survive.


Character Name: Ezekiel
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He is 5'7''. Has brown hair and light brown eyes. His body type is mesomorph. When his resting face makes him look like he is angry all the time.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Denied.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- Please include several examples or pieces of lore from the server, you can find such on the forums or the wiki

- Avoid the "village was raided by (something) and (destroyed)/(killed family)" as it is overused

- Add more detail, explain where your character went and maybe even why, what faith your character's family followed, which nation the village was in, etc.

- Add some personality traits and flaws in interesting facts

 

You may reapply in 6 hours. Feel free to ask to ask me questions if you have them. Here's a link to the new player discord where you can ask questions as well: https://discord.gg/sMsNUu.

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