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Iceberg335

By Iceberg335

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Ice#4031
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing things that make you all mega powerful and super
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Suddenly having super information about something and able to do it.
    Status: Denied

I am a halfling that was taken while I was still a young, I had wondered too far and had gotten kidnapped by some wondering men hoping to make a quick coin. I do not really remember my life before my kidnapping except that my mother had been pregnant and my father had been very playful with me. We would go on adventures and fly “He would pick me up and make whooshing sounds”. The men sold me left me to a strange gang. I was prettied up and told that I would never see my family again but that I would be given to a new one. I was a servant, after doing my normal duties I would sneak out at night and practice fighting with a tiny sword I found, which was probably a dagger of one of the men. I practiced nightly so that one day I may find my escape.

 

My escape has finally arrived! I am almost free from this nightmare, Ive been here for 24 years and I have finally found a way to escape into a new start. The food crates that come in from the ocean are only checked once, I am going to hide into one of the apple crates once they have been check marked for the ship. The sea is dizzying, Ive been eating the apples as I dont know how far the journey will be...

 

I hear lots of yelling now, I think ive made it to where ever the ship comes from. Im going to jump out an run when my crate gets moved. 

I dont think they were very happy to have a stowaway hehe. This new place though is much much greener than the bad place, I think the Green Lady favors here, Everyone seems so much happier...Im going to keep wondering for a while, maybe Ill find happiness again...a new start.....a new life.......

Character Name: Idarana 'Zebin' Bird
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: brown hair, two different colored eyes, right emerald green left amethyst purple. Light skinned in a green dress, blue flower crown, 2'5" abt 30 Lbs
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

“Well Kind Sir it is none of the above! I’m here for a new start, a new life filled with my own created happiness, sadness, just something new” I say with a small curtsy. “Will this Beautiful City offer me any of that? I have been wondering for an offly long way...” I smile at the man with a slightly tilted head in question. 

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Hey there Iceberg335! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

When you are finished, please message me on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well.

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