ILoveBitterballs

• Your powergaming definition is not wrong, but it isn’t suitable from a roleplay perspective. I suggesting giving power  emoting a google, and seeing what you come up with.
• Your biography iss there to show you have a rough idea of where your character comes from, and so on. Remember, LOTC has been around since 2011, and we have a lot of lore/story that you can pull details from.
  • You need to include two pieces of lore. This could be a location in where your character was born, or places they have visited.
    • [Dark Elves]
    • [Atlas] – The world your character would have been born in,
    • [Arcas] – The area we live now.
  • Try structuring the biography like such:
    • Introduction- Where was your character born? What was his family like? You only need a couple of sentences, keep in mind.
    • Middle – What does he like doing? Did he travel? Where to?
    • Conclusion – What is he doing now?
• Your character description should be physical based. So, height is good.
  • Hair colour, eye colour, build- even what he wears.
• Remember to look at the dark elves wiki page- golden eyes are not suitable for that race. They can have Green, Blue, Purple, Grey, or Red.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Thank you for first report

If you still have suggestion i love to hear them

After following your app up with the person you noted as the friend who introduced you to lotc, I’m going to deny this.

You seem to not have acquired permission from said friend to play their son. To make a character, of a child of someone else, you need to have their explicit permission.

Following from this, some changes I asked for are still not made after several attempts.

I did give you links to pages on where you might find relevent lore, but instead you simply used the names of said locations. While still technically correct, it shows no effort to look for information on your part.

Take your time- this does not mean you have to wait a month to reapply. You can post a new application in 24 hours time.

My advice is read- read lore and read other applications. Make a character that is unique to you.