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Tom2409
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Information that you couldn't know from each other with reason roleplay
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting that makes real life person live a second life in game it is an awesome way to be distracted from your real live
    Status: Denied

 

I am a normal dark elve.

Job : assasin

I've been born in atlas and now live in arcas

 

I have been raised by my father cycropolus and mother aitous in the area arcas.

I helped my father with his jobs  and battles so I could learn his job for later and could travel alone with no help.

Now i've been grown up, sometimes help my father when ever i can but my most jobs i do them alone.


Character Name: Cynifo
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 40
Physical Description: I am 1,85, white hair, blue eyes, son of cycropolus and loves the shadows
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  • Your powergaming definition is not wrong, but it isn’t suitable from a roleplay perspective. I suggesting giving power  emoting a google, and seeing what you come up with.
  • Your biography iss there to show you have a rough idea of where your character comes from, and so on. Remember, LOTC has been around since 2011, and we have a lot of lore/story that you can pull details from.
    • You need to include two pieces of lore. This could be a location in where your character was born, or places they have visited.
    • Try structuring the biography like such:
      • Introduction- Where was your character born? What was his family like? You only need a couple of sentences, keep in mind.
      • Middle – What does he like doing? Did he travel? Where to?
      • Conclusion – What is he doing now?
  • Your character description should be physical based. So, height is good.
    • Hair colour, eye colour, build- even what he wears.
  • Remember to look at the dark elves wiki page- golden eyes are not suitable for that race. They can have Green, Blue, Purple, Grey, or Red.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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After following your app up with the person you noted as the friend who introduced you to lotc, I’m going to deny this.

 

You seem to not have acquired permission from said friend to play their son. To make a character, of a child of someone else, you need to have their explicit permission.

 

Following from this, some changes I asked for are still not made after several attempts.

I did give you links to pages on where you might find relevent lore, but instead you simply used the names of said locations. While still technically correct, it shows no effort to look for information on your part.

 

Take your time- this does not mean you have to wait a month to reapply. You can post a new application in 24 hours time.

 

My advice is read- read lore and read other applications. Make a character that is unique to you.

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