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INTELION111
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by remembering who you are playing and how you are supposed to act, what I would do is remember who I am every time my name is said like Eridor. or I would simply make a character who would do things I do naturally like being thoughtful before doing something or being flexible for high jumps
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it would be unfair to others because it would be like if your character is about to face a random kingdom and then suddenly he knows everything about that kingdom and where everything is
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Eridor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: really high around 130lb red eyes a raged robe like cloth wears a fox mask, has a third eye
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

(With A kind looking face but thinking of thievery tactics) "sure I grew up in a kind small little town in the streets eating rotting food to survive until i found magic and books and a tutor to teach me on how to read! From that day forward I started working hard on the cold and hot fields as a traveling slave like worker all around the world doing all kinds of jobs too like building boats and cleaning mansions. you may notice I have a fox mask on my side, for this was the last gift my parent ever gave to me during my 6th birthday party. my parent died when I was quite young leaving me to fend for myself until the governor found me and put me with the other kids in a "school"(with disgusted voice). I eventually escaped into the wilderness and lived life picking berries and other survival methods like hunting until as I told you met magic and books. when I was working in such jobs when I met some old man who told me of a job opportunity on a faraway land  which is this very one we are on right now, I'm currently looking for a job here until I found one and was headed that way, now tell me your story.

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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please update your powergaming response to show how you would better avoid forcing things on to others.
  • Please change the actions in your backstory to be clearly written in third person.
  • Unfortunately your skin does not match your selected race. Please update whichever you would like to correct.

 

If you need help making the changes, here are some sources:

 

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

@orlanth. (include the .)

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

 

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Changed Status to Denied


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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please update your powergaming response to show how you would better avoid forcing things on to others.
  • Please change the actions in your backstory to be clearly written in third person.
  • Unfortunately your skin does not match your selected race. Please update whichever you would like to correct.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

 

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