iSir_Taco

Hey man, thanks for applying to Lord of the Craft! I'm excited to see you're interested in joining our little community, here. There are a few issues with the application I need you to work on before I can accept you. However, because you applied as a guest and not on a registered account, I have to deny you!

• Both your definitions are wrong. If you take another look at the rules or do a little more research, you'll find the proper definition for them. Go ahead and change that definition for me.
• Your backstory isn't bad, but the switch from third person to first person midway through makes it a bit difficult to read. On top of that, it is missing any sort of reference to currently accepted server lore, to show you've some understanding on the status of current, server lore. Please edit up the formatting and view point of the application, and add 1-2 references to current LotC lore.
• This is just a personal suggestion. Your name is a bit too close to "Legolas" from Lord of the Rings. While it isn't breaking any rules, it might make your time on the server a bit easier if you come up with a more unique, personal name.
• Please expand on the description of the character as well. Include a basic run down of what he's wearing, as well as a bit more about how he looks. Thinks like height, weight, eye color, skin color all go a long way.

Thank you for taking your time to read my response! Please feel free to register to the server before applying again, that way you don't have to get auto denied and will be given a 24 hour grace period for your application. If you need any help, don't be afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me on the status update section or my profile directly!