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iSir_Taco


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  • Rules: No
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The process of getting information inside the game and respecting roleplay players OOC or IC
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using actions that are not possible in real life but can be used in a game, usingg for example /take your items
    Status: Denied

Elf from the cold lands of the north, he was born on the edge of a forest in a poor family with his brother Malink and his mother Elizink. Orcs devastated my family taking my brother as a prisoner, now I seek revenge and find my family, the only skills I know are with the bow, but with good friends I can achieve my goals.
I'm in the quest to become a true archer master, meet new places and new people. 
Serve my lord, my king faithfully as a member of the Royal army after I found my brother's location


Character Name: Diegolas
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Good looking nice elf, some scars are notced by battle, starngely he seems possitive
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hey man, thanks for applying to Lord of the Craft! I'm excited to see you're interested in joining our little community, here. There are a few issues with the application I need you to work on before I can accept you. However, because you applied as a guest and not on a registered account, I have to deny you!

  • Both your definitions are wrong. If you take another look at the rules or do a little more research, you'll find the proper definition for them. Go ahead and change that definition for me.
  • Your backstory isn't bad, but the switch from third person to first person midway through makes it a bit difficult to read. On top of that, it is missing any sort of reference to currently accepted server lore, to show you've some understanding on the status of current, server lore. Please edit up the formatting and view point of the application, and add 1-2 references to current LotC lore.
  • This is just a personal suggestion. Your name is a bit too close to "Legolas" from Lord of the Rings. While it isn't breaking any rules, it might make your time on the server a bit easier if you come up with a more unique, personal name.
  • Please expand on the description of the character as well. Include a basic run down of what he's wearing, as well as a bit more about how he looks. Thinks like height, weight, eye color, skin color all go a long way.

Thank you for taking your time to read my response! Please feel free to register to the server before applying again, that way you don't have to get auto denied and will be given a 24 hour grace period for your application. If you need any help, don't be afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me on the status update section or my profile directly!

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