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JarlSunshine

By JarlSunshine

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Ragor#4951
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The knowledge of something out of character used to your unfair benefit in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: to give your "toon" or character max benefits or taking advantage of in game mechanics to further the characters development in a unnatural non decorum way
    Status: Denied

Ragor was born on the winter solstice. 

His land was named after the Germanic tribes of old, Germania. The Germanians were skilled warriors trained in Glima, sword and shield tatics and other methods of inflicting Grevious bodily harm. It is said the Germanians were so renowned kings and even emperors would employ their services., however this was long ago . Ragor was born into a shattered and dying Germania. he was one of the last of his people. after many hash winters and the spreading of famine. Ragor and his people had no other choice but to leave their homeland. Taking the scrolls of history, and what little supplies and weapons his people had left the Germanians set sail toward another land....

2 weeks at sea, Ragors Journal . We have cut portions yet again , I fear we will run out of food soon. The Old  and very young have perished . We have not seen any land as of yet. I pray to the Gods we find something soon. We are slowly dying on this Cursed ship

5 weeks at sea, Ragors Journal. We only have a few days of water and food left. were setting up whatever jars we have left to capture the rain fall from this storm. to whoeve......

As Ragor was writing his last entry a wave smashed into the side of his ship and then nothing...

 

Ragor wakes up on a beach with driftwood and the tattered sails around him. there was no sign of his people, no sign of any survivors.....

“ where am I?”

 

Character Name: RagorOfGermania
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Body of a viking raider, tall lean and muscular. a few scars on his torso and head, and covered with Druidic tattoos
Roleplay Scenario:

Hello Good sir, 

I am RagorOfGermania, I am a mercenary looking to sell my services to the highest bidder, Perhaps you are in need of one? what are you in need of? a Guard? Assassin? Although my Rates arent cheap, I assure you I am....Vigilant

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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

  • Your Character Biography appears to have a decent story-line, however, It includes some lore pieces that are not relevant to LotC and are more based on real life: ‘His land was named after the Germanic tribes of old, Germania’ and all the other pieces that speak about the Germans in some way.
  • Your Character Biography appears to be lacking in regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC WIki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be good, but it is missing some action- It needs to be an action and text emote.

    You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 
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Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.
 

  • Your Character Biography appears to have a decent story-line, however, It includes some lore pieces that are not relevant to LotC and are more based on real life: ‘His land was named after the Germanic tribes of old, Germania’ and all the other pieces that speak about the Germans in some way.
  • Your Character Biography appears to be lacking in regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC WIki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be good, but it is missing some action- It needs to be an action and text emote.

    You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.
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