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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: xlou_mariex
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: just ignore them and carry on with my rp unless it is something significant then report them
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it detaches you from your character and something your character should not know
    Status: Denied

Character Name: visenya
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: long white pin straight hair that she sometimes has in braids. visenya is 5 foot she is slim and elegant. grey eyes and she likes to mainly wear black
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 

"bold of you to assume I would show up" she says head held high with defiance in her eyes. "there is not much to say" Visenya mumbles as she sits with a goblet of wine held in her hand sipping at it every so often. "i was born into a noble family emotionless bastards they were, had high expectancies of me and my siblings each of them just managing to complete the tasks set for them but me? i didnt want to sew, get married to a man 3 times my age carry his spawn like a breeding mare and then die in childbirth after my 20th babe. that wasn't who i was so i trained to rid myself of feelings when my father and mother tried to stop me it didnt work i cut my hair short as a child and covered it in mud to look like a boy and carried on training. when it came to meeting my future husband on my wedding day i ran. mud covered my white dress as i sprinted through the woods into another kingdom they never found me not that they cared about me just the fresh womb they lost in producing more heirs after a few years i had explored place to place finding new quests and items to collect i steal from the rich to give to the poor a bit of a robin hood character i am. and now im here talking to a lazy old croan who has nothing better to do than listen to other peoples lifes, that enough for you?" 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please review your explanation on how to avoid powergaming. Although almost there, do elaborate a bit on what a specific powergaming would look like (in a fight, for example). And how you would go about avoiding engaging in such.
  • Please review your explanation on how metagaming disrupts fair roleplay. We are looking for an explanation on what impact metagaming has on roleplay, for example a situation you are involved in.
    • On this page you can find the definitions for both these terms.
       
  • Please re-apply with a new character backstory that is less explicit. Keep in mind that the server is pg-13, and that adult subject matter such as here should be kept to a bare minimum. Also make sure to pay attention to punctuation and capitalisation.
     
  • Please make sure that your character’s appearance also fits with the lore of your chosen race.
    • In this case, be sure to read up on the lore for the Dark Elves. If you need more information, you can find it here

My discord is @qraw_ if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

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If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

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