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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using information in roleplay you can know but your character not
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: force something to happen but the othger person does not get anything to say about it
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Thoradin Stoneminer was the first son in a rich dwarf family. he was always very closes and had not much friends. when he was 16. he was trained to a warrior but was not very good at it. he loved to explore with his only friend: Torinit Kilhig. together they knew the whole land. when he was 26 he was mining stone all day long for his father. when he was 35 his father died and he got most of his gold and gems, but his brother Bolguk Farvin was jealous and wanted all his money. one daay he asked to go sailing and talk about their dead father. Thoradin doubted but came. his brother almost drowned him and leaved him in the wather. afther 30 minuts of almost drowning Thoradin come to land but did not reconized it. he picked a random direction hoping that it will lead him to home but that was the opposite way he must have gone. for jears he wandered until he came to a lonely house. he meated a young elf there and asked where he was. 'at the edge of Atlas said the elf, 'Haeluor is a day walking from here.' 'what is Haeluor' asked Thoradin. 'a city from the high elves' awnsered the elf Thoradin decided to go to the city. he mined there to earn money and learned about magic. he liked arcane magic the most. after three years he decided to explore the world and meat other people.


Character Name: Thoradin Stoneminer
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 60
Physical Description: an old dwarf that gets easely distracted
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Because you applied as a guest, you sadly cannot be put on pending where you would be given 24 hours to fix your application! :(

I would recommend that if you choose to re-apply, you would make account before submitting the application.

 

You can re-apply in 6 hours!

 

What you need to fix to your next application:

 

- There are quite a lot of grammatical errors in your application, if you could try to spot  at least some of those and fix them, that would be great!

 - Character description: This part is supposed to only tell us what your character looks like, height, eye color, hair color and so on!

- " he mined there to earn money and learned about magic. he liked arcane magic the most." I'm not 100% sure if you mean he learn that magic exists or if he learnt the magic itself, So I will just point out that do keep in mind that you aren't allowed to start with any form of magical abilities. 

 

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