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JMonkey11


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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use information that your character is roleplaying
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you build your character to be good at a thing
    Status: Denied

My character Levos Wranvalur is a determined boy. Who is wanting to seek revenge on the orc who killed his mom. Using a bow, and sword. He trains most of his life. To make sure no one he loves ever dies again.


Character Name: Ievos Wranvalur
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 67
Physical Description: A Dark elf, determind to get revenge for his mother. Grey hair, between pale and non pale skin, skinny.



Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ Consider expanding your "Interesting Facts" to full sentences.

 

 

Your application was good but good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

 Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Hey this is JMonkey11 I will make those changes, but I will have to do it a different forum. when I posted that I was a guess, then I made a account so I don't think I can edit it.

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