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JohnPaulII
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    Discord: johnthepope
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by respecting other players’ agency and keeping roleplay collaborative. I never control another character’s actions, thoughts, or outcomes, and I avoid auto-hits or guaranteed success. I keep my character’s abilities consistent with their background and established limits, and I accept consequences, including failure or injury. Most importantly, I focus on telling a balanced story where everyone has room to contribute and communicate OOC when needed to keep scenes fair and enjoyable.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by using out-of-character knowledge to influence in-character actions. When a character reacts to information they couldn’t realistically know, it breaks immersion and creates unfair advantages. This undermines trust between players, removes meaningful tension, and damages the collaborative storytelling experience by prioritizing winning over authentic character behavior.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: John 'The Sload' Martin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 38
Physical Description: A rugged, swarthy, middle-aged man, his palms calloused like leather. He stands at 5'9", stocky and solid at a hearty 235 lbs. His clothes are gaudy.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 

John  stands there a long moment before lowering himself onto the cushion—slowly, like he’s doing the tent a favor by not breaking it.

His thick, leathery hands rest on his knees. The floating candlelight catches the shine of his extravagant rings and the sharp lines of his shaved head.

— “You’ve been expectin’ me?” he mutters. “Then you know I didn’t crawl out of this swamp.”

He exhales through his nose.

— “I was born where men worked till their hands split and bled. Learned early that if you’re not the strongest in the room, you’re the one scrubbing the floor. So I got strong.” His jaw tightens. “Stronger than any of ‘em.”

“They called me ‘The Sload.’ Said I was built like one. Thick. Ugly. Hard to kill.” A humorless smirk flickers. “I kept the name. Seemed to scare people.”

He leans forward slightly. 

— “Worked docks. Broke bones. Collected debts. Wore better clothes than the men who paid me, just to remind ‘em I could.”

His eyes narrow at the hag. “Folks don’t like me much. I don’t lose sleep over it.”

He'd pause.

— “So there’s your story, witch. A man who got tired of being stepped on—and made sure it never happened again.” He tilts his head. “Now tell me why you’ve been waitin’.”

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Part of your application is AI, please rewrite these parts without the use of such tools.
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example of how you personally avoid powergaming & metagaming in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming.You can also learn more about combat roleplay here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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