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JollySquatch


JollySquatch
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Bear in mind that each "character" is a person with emotions and goals. Play as though each action carries with it a karma-based consequence with larger actions having greater swings in that karma spectrum. In simpler terms... don't be an ass or the server gods will punish you. Play the game- don't force the game to play with you.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You're not omniscient- your character shouldn't be either. (I don't use discord anyway). Basically same rules as the stock market. No backroom deals so everyone has a fair shot at whatever goal, and no one gets left out.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Jolly
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 33
Physical Description: A dark haired mustached halfling standing at a respectable 3 feet 3 inches. He wears a dark green robe and of course no shoes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

My home was isolated from the other Halflings, my father was a charcoal maker, which requires a lot of wood water and space away from people. We went into town often when I was younger but as my father got older we went less and less. When the goblins happened across our little hill, they took what they wanted and killed my parents while I hid in a cupboard. 

After I buried my parents and repaired the home to the best of my ability I did my best to maintain our homestead for 12 years before I was brave enough to venture out into the world... At the first crossroads I came across this poster asking for people in need of work. That's how I came here.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • I understood your definition of powergame- but it doesn't wholly fit in and represent all that we think it does on LotC! perhaps look for the rules on it, or ask someone to help you try to pinpoint the definition a bit better!
  • Your backstory is starting off well! I'd mix it in with some actions and dialogue which can be shown like the example below, additionally I'd ask you strive to avoid the goblin trope- this is mostly to avoid the classic 'my family were killed by orcs' so you could say bandits or even undead!

EX. "After I buried my parents and repaired the home to the best of my ability I did my best to maintain our homestead for 12 years before I was brave enough to venture out into the world..." said the halfling as he stared down at the ground for a moment in remembrance. "(continue talking)"

 



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

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As well as this if you still need help:

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Failed to use dialogue and third person in backstory.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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