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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using external information that you character doesn't actually know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: being way too OP like ripping off someones arm without letting them to reply
    Status: Denied

Hagmar started his life in his native land of skyrim back before the race was killed of by the nords in the Morethic Era. He spent much of his time as a child sparing and practicing with wooden swords and shields with his siblings. His father was a strong and highly respected knight, so much that when he would pass through cities near everyone knew him by name. As Hagmar came to his late teens, early adult life he decided to become a knight beside his father, so he began his training. His father taught him much about being a knight but as time passed on, he met a powerful mage and he began to learn some magic. At this point Hagmar decided that he would be a paladin. His father was proud that Hagmar was finding his own way. But soon the nords started coming in, times became hard and the population of the Altmer began to fall, they were constantly fighting the nords. Many stayed to fight for their land. One day while fighting beside his father, he is brutally killed before his very eyes. It sends him into an uncontrollable rage and unable to think clearly begins trying to heal his father in the middle of battle. He gets dragged out of battle for his own protection. Unable bare with watching his father die in front of him, he decided to flee skyrim and travel through the other provinces. Hagmar eventually settles down in daggerfall and lives on his own. Never to return to skyrim again. He prefers not to attract attention but works for the good of the people. 


Character Name: Hagmar
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Hagmar will have pale white skin, silver hair, purple eyes and be average height, 5'8"-5'9"
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been put on PENDING for these reason(s):

-Lord of the Craft has entirely separate lore than that of the Elder Scrolls series. Your bio must contain pieces of server lore in it, so all references to the Elder Scrolls should be changed and fit within the servers lore. Here is a link to the wiki where you can read up on lore for the Snow Elves. Link 

-As a new applicant your character is not allowed to have any knowledge of magic. You must find a teacher in game to learn any magic, you may put in your bio that your character wishes to find a teacher. 

-Just a reminder that in Lord of the Craft elves are not considered adults until they reach the age of 50. If you decide to keep your character at 18 years old he will be seen as a child among other elves.

-Two of your facts are also references to the Elder Scrolls so these will need to be changed as well. One of your facts should also contain a weakness your character would have. This could be a number of things such as having a fear of fire, water, ghosts, creatures, etc. 

-Your skin doesn't really fit into the time period of the server. I would suggest changing the color scheme of the clothes in order to fit better. 



 

This means your application was good but just needed these changes to them. You will have 24 hours to make these changes with the edit function. Once you make the changes feel free to message me to take another look at it! After the 24 hours has passed your application will either be ACCEPTED or DENIED. If you’re denied you will have to wait 3 hours before reapplying.

 

Don’t worry friend, here is a link to the LotC New Player Help Discord! https://discord.gg/YjPZxu2



Feel free to contact me if you need further assistance you can pm me on the forums or message me on discord at: Austin#4276

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Your application has been DENIED because of these reason(s):

-You failed to make the necessary changes within the 24 hour time limit, so your app has been denied.

 

 

 

You may reapply in (3) hours.


 

Don’t worry friend, here is a link to the LotC New Player Help Discord! https://discord.gg/YjPZxu2



Feel free to contact me if you need further assistance you can pm me on the forums or message me on discord at: Austin#4276

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