Jsivic

Under review.

Pending.

Your application has been placed as pending for the following reasons - 

- Elaborate further on how this powerful mage questioned your persona

- Explain how your persona learned about Paladins, why does he wish to be a Paladin instead of a Cleric or an Ascended for example?

- Explain what your persona did when they stayed in the Holy Orenian Empire

- Avoid the "Parents were killed by (something something)" as it is overused

- You cannot know magic in any way, it must be learned on the server itself

- You say that your persona has trained with orcs, though it isn't mentioned in your persona's biography

- There are quite a decent amount of Snow Elves who still live

Send me a message once you've made the edits and I'll take a look. If you have questions, feel free to send me a message for that too and I'll be happy to help out! You have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you think you may need more time, just let me know.

Denied.

Applicant has not edited their application within the time given nor have they requested additional time.

You may reapply in 3 hours.