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Junabeeb
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: June#7100
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Knowing my character's limitations. Basing your actions around those around you is also a good rule to go by.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Not only does it disrupt the natural flow of roleplay and dialogue, but creates an unfair environment for everyone playing. Allies and enemies alike. It creates a precedent that would devolve into the antithesis of roleplay where you can barely be your character.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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I begin to draw my bow aiming at the crone's head but then a studder runs down my arm. Releasing the bow, a moment of silence passes, with me and her just staring upon one another. I relented an, "Ok." I begin with a sigh and say, "I grew up in a tribe of orcs where it always snowed, until a group of men and elves burned my village and slaughtered my people." I become visibly distressed and continue, "I hid and ran like a coward," I said said with despair but overwhelmingly guised with anger. "Everyday since then I vow that I would kill any human and elf the I come across. While living in the wilds, I became very proficient with a bow. This is my weapon of choice, I use range and perception to hunt down my enemies. Now I wander, looking for another purpose and eliminating all elves and men alike." I paused and wondered why I spouted all this at some old hag. "It doesn't matter I thought, she looks human enough." In a split second I raise and draw my bow and folly a n arrow between her eyes. 


Character Name: Rumor
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: A leaner female orc. 6'10", 280 pounds, long black braided hair, olive skin, dark green eyes and usually black furs as attire.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

✿ Its a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  

 

You only have 48 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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✿ Its a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  


 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Tigergiri), my forum account, or on the server (Tigergiri)

You are also encouraged to join our  LOTC Discord , a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community. If you need any additional help please look at our New player guide 

You may reapply at anytime however please make the above changes before you do so. 

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