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leosmith1

By leosmith1

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: leosmith1981#1528
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use a 3rd party software to contact your friends about various // on-going events.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is fail rp and being unrealistic.
    Status: Denied

When I was born I was born in the mountains living happily until I was 6 where my parents and I was captured by the elfs, forced to labour until I was 14 where my parents and I made a escape but my dad was soon to be captured and his life was taken.  From then me and my mum adventured a safe place too stay low, my mum said ''Never forgot what they did'' before she died when I was 16 I ventured out into the wild and seaked for revenge but I knew I needed to set up a base in which I did but little did I know they where coming. From my 1st day being 17 I saw them on my ground, I set out with the items I needed and miles and miles away over the vast oceans I found a new place. I'm 18 now and living fine but I knew I need the revenge not just for my father, for my mum too. I was 19 now and I was living in good conditions but my money was going down. I then started doing business in the dark side at 20 and I got interested on where this can lead me too. To my current age I'm am travelling to find the elfs. 

Character Name: Khilvek Stermin
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Stong, black eyes, black hair, mediumish body, 4ft 6, 160 pounds
Roleplay Scenario:

"Hello kind sir ""Shakes hand". "Well I've come to this city to seek wealth I really do need the money its been tuff over at home". "I have also come to seek adventure to further improve my swordsman skills". "Oh man I'm starving do you know a place were I can get some food"?

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

 

→ You gave a good example of Metagaming, just be sure to include a definition with it.

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ You never stated if you had roleplayed before.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.


 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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