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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: focus on collaborative storytelling, respect other players' agency, and ensure your character's actions are realistic and fair.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by exploiting out-of-character knowledge to gain an unfair advantage in character actions.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: phantom
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: im a red orc 6'3 a wide jaw, flat nose, and pointed ears And tusks
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

i begin to tell my tale "i was out hunting for food in the black forest when i herd a blood curdling scream from the direction of my house so I run there at full speed and find my wife, and children strug up like trophies with the kings seal branded on there forehead and from that day forward i swore to slauter the king and all his followers to avenge my family" I say in a cold dead tone void of any emotion "i came to find and kill the ones who murdered my family......now will you tell me what i want to know or will you die alongside them" i say slowly drawing my twin daggers.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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