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Kaigakuu
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: kaigakuu
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You contact a staff about it since its against the rules.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins other people's plan of roleplay so if you know an information oocly you keep it oocly and make it that you're character icly dont know it an do like nothing is happening.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Vhusoo Yutora
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Vhusoo would be an human with white hair and a normal human skin. He would also wear a black outfit and would have normal greyish eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))



"Well huh..-" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

"Why im here are you saying?" he would try to think, think deeply the man seems rather carefree but rather lazy and sure of him "Well it all started when i was a kid, i was living with both of my parents and my twin sister, until my mother died of sickness and my twin sister disapeared for months. During those months well my father started blaming me for the fact that my sister disapeared and he started to get violent and even be something that i could called ''abusive'' but a few years later we found out that some bandits did killed my little sister. After that my father was still abusing me for years until my 15's that he also died of sickness. After that i decided to go on my way, exploring the world not because i wanted it but because i needed to survive. Well a few years later, i got on my 18's and here i am m'am-" He was pretty neutral with a hint of playful tone while he said the last part otherwise he was pretty thinkful.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 



 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

  • Your skin is a good starting point, but unfortunately I can’t tell what they are wearing. Additionally, while humans can have grey eyes, the eyes on the skin are very dark. If you need help editing, let me know and we can get it sorted!

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @plausiblewings2 to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub!: New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately.

  • Just make all the changes mentioned in pending and reapply!

My discord is @plausiblewings2 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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