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kennyth22


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    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowing things that you shouldn't outside of your character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When your power is not realistic
    Status: Denied

Ulysses is a human who was born in the Kingdom of Norland. He lives on the border in a small village, where he aspires to become a general. He trains every single day, never missing a day. Due to this, his mind is really simple. He loves to fight and never talks things through. When he was younger, his parents didn't provide him with anything, so he grew up never asking for much. He is very humble and doesn't pick a fight with anyone unless they do first. His plan was to join the Kingdoms army, but he had to give up his plans after his village was massacred by bandits disguised as the Kingdoms Knights. He now seeks revenge against the Kingdom of Norland.


Character Name: Ulysses
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Ulysses is a peasant that dreams of becoming a general. He trains everyday in order to get stronger. His mind is simple and he doesn't ask for much.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been:

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As you applied with a guest account, you sadly cannot be put on pending where you would be given 24 hours to edit/fix your application.

 

Feel free to re-apply right away!


What you need to fix to your next application:

 

 Your biography mentions some things about Norland, which are fine. However revenge for Norland makes no sense as Norland was already destroyed on the server, few weeks back. Of course you could try to mention out that your character isn't aware of it yet.

 Your definition is incorrect. It is only supposed to tell us what he looks like. Hair color and so on!

 

 

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

Would also suggest that you make an account before re-applying! It will make the applying process much easier!

 
If you have any questions or if you are in need of assistance, feel free to contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

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