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Cory P.

By Cory P.

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Cedany#9182
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Playing with knowledge your character couldn't know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Saying your character does a powerful move instead of attempts to do a power move
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

     “Good day sir! I’m here for adventure! To adventure both the inhabited and the uninhabited! Any suggestions where I should start?”

Character Name: Cedany
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Cedany is 5'8, toned and has divine blue eyes. As well as a nice set of blonde locks. He wears a humble attire that makes it easier for him to move
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many mistakes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ You mentioned Christianity in your Personality Traits/Quirks section. Please be aware that real religions do not exist in game, however there are many religions that are similar to real ones that can be found in game.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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