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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: out of charicter
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: in charicter
    Status: Denied

Character Name: lizzie
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: lord
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Sadly this application has been denied as not all the required changes were met within the 24 hour period. 

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still incorrect. What they mean on Lord of the Craft can be found on the LotC Wiki (the definitions will be located just to the right under 'New Player Information'). Remember to write them out in your own words however as copying them exactly is plagiarism.

 

- Your character bio seems to be... Missing. It looks as if somehow the application was just copied and then pasted into the box instead. Don't forget when writing your character's bio to include around 3 references to server lore along with personal events that have happened to the character and shaped them so far.

 

- For the character description we'd rather see you describe what the person looks like (hair, eyes, height, etc.) and you can't start off as nobility either sadly. Though once you're accepted if a noble house wants to bring you in that's perfectly fine or you could try in rp to form your own noble house. Such just can't be in your application.

 

- For the Interesting Facts section include some character traits, flaws, and/or perhaps a special skill they have. 

 

Fear not, however! This is not the end as you may create a new application 3 hours from this post to try again.

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