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By kaye

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: out of charicter
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: in charicter
    Status: Denied
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      Your character must be atleast 18 years old, and if they are an elf can be in the hundreds of years old.
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    • lizzie a girl 


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Character Name: lizzie
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: lord
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Sadly this application has been denied as not all the required changes were met within the 24 hour period. 

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still incorrect. What they mean on Lord of the Craft can be found on the LotC Wiki (the definitions will be located just to the right under 'New Player Information'). Remember to write them out in your own words however as copying them exactly is plagiarism.

 

- Your character bio seems to be... Missing. It looks as if somehow the application was just copied and then pasted into the box instead. Don't forget when writing your character's bio to include around 3 references to server lore along with personal events that have happened to the character and shaped them so far.

 

- For the character description we'd rather see you describe what the person looks like (hair, eyes, height, etc.) and you can't start off as nobility either sadly. Though once you're accepted if a noble house wants to bring you in that's perfectly fine or you could try in rp to form your own noble house. Such just can't be in your application.

 

- For the Interesting Facts section include some character traits, flaws, and/or perhaps a special skill they have. 

 

Fear not, however! This is not the end as you may create a new application 3 hours from this post to try again.

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