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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge you have that your character has not yet discovered to the characters advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Emoting for other characters when they should have the choice to determine what happens to themselves.
    Status: Denied

A dark elf that grew up with her young sisters that she raised on her own since her parents would travel to bring home money. Her childhood home was a small cottage on the outskirts of Ker'nor in Axios. After an attack lead by multiple Ologs, her sisters were taken and killed while she was trying to defend them. Since the attack, she has been on the run trying to forget her dark past. She hopes to find a new place to settle in and have a restart on life.


Character Name: Esmerae
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 119
Physical Description: White hair
5'7"
thin but muscular
greyish purple eyes
light grey skin
pink dress with brown leather acsents
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your metagaming and powergaming don't properly convey that you know what they mean fully.

Your biography is too short.

Your description needs to be in a sentence format.

Your interesting character facts need to have context, and need to be full sentences.

Because you are a guest, you are unable to edit the application. I recommend you apply as a forum user.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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