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KMSBisco109

By KMSBisco109

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Darryl109 "Anchovy"#4020
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The person is aware of something that the character is not and acts on it without the character they're controlling knowing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: The player ignores what the effects of the character are
    Status: Denied

I waved to the man and say "Hello, I am Bismarck, I am here to seek my sister and reunite with her, for she has been kidnapped when I was just a child and to seek vengance against the people who kidnapped her"

Character Name: Bismarck Lazel
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A Blonde Woman
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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