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kopoki321

By kopoki321

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: kopoki321-1954#9954
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta is when you know somethinf but you character don't and you act on the information that you have not your character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: is when you emote something unrealistic or force an emote
    Status: Denied

Born in a small village, being abandon after his birth.

Left to die on the street like someone mistake that they want to throw away .

Being adopt by a maid of a welthy familly, they struggle but they were happy.

I didn't go play with other kid i stay "home" to help his "mom".

I fell in love with the welthy familly daughter, we dated in secrete until she was force in a marriage with someone.

I try to get her back but that mean i expose our secret, me and my mom was kick out , my mom beng but they kick her in the face.

She got severly injurt and died the next week.

Character Name: koolp
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: he got blue eye, blonde short hair, tall and slim
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

To earn a place in society

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WestCarolina

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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WestCarolina


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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

See the above pending message for the required edits!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also  /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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