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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Kromez7#6850
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge that I know IRL to influence my actions in character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing immersion breaking, or godly actions to make yourself more powerful to the detriment of other players' role-playing enjoyment.
    Status: Denied

Kyson was raised by a blacksmithing father named Gerald who showed him how to build weapons and armor. Kyson's mother died birthing him. Kyson was born and raised in the Badlands and had to endure repeated incidents of banditry and attacks against his father's forge. This causes Kyson to learn how to fight at a young age. When Kyson was 18, another bandit raid occurred but during this one a bandit killed Gerald, orphaning Kyson.  Done with having to deal with bandits, and not wanting to be at the forge where his father died, Kyson left the Badlands and is going to establish his own forge near a larger city where he can learn more about smithing (and maybe a little enchanting) and try to become the most famous blacksmith in all the realms.


Character Name: Kyson Goss
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Kyson is 5'9", 200 lb., human blacksmith. He has light skin (Caucasian) with dark brown hair and eyes. He is very physically fit thanks to his work.
Roleplay Scenario:

Hello! I am here to establish myself as the greatest blacksmith in all the realms! Tell me sir, is there a place where I can gather some supplies or a location that would be a good place to build a new forge?

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and 10 sentences and please don’t mention The Badlands as it does not exist on LOTC . If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
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Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and 10 sentences and please don’t mention The Badlands as it does not exist on LOTC . If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
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    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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